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(0 votes) 5:45 pm
April 3, 2012
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Cambridge 5, Test B, General module:
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening?What can govenment do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
The amount of humankind waste that took months to be produced in 1970s is being made in a day in 2012. In my opinion, this evolution stems form mass production, multiplied world's population, and widely advocated consumerism.
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5:34 pm
Hi Ali
You wrote:
The amount of humankind waste that took months to be produced in 1970s is being made in a day in 2012. In my opinion, this evolution stems form mass production, multiplied world's population, and widely advocated consumerism.
No, that's fine as an intro. Just some tiny edits:
The amount of waste that took months to be produced in 1970s is being made in a day in 2012. In my opinion, this shocking figure stems from mass production, the huge increase in the world's population, and increasing consumerism.
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