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Is your career the most important thing inyour life? (New version)
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Today, in this competitive world, every individual needs a good job to survive to the best. Nevertheless, of this career alone is not quite sufficient, there are certain other aspects in life which can add more colors to life. In this essay, I would like to outline all those additional aspects that can make a man’s life contempt.

            Foremost, regarding career, its quite obvious that, it is one of the basic needs of this modern word so as to earn his own bread. Workplace is an area where people spend most of their valuable time so, if his career really quenches his thirst then, he will enjoy his life better. Besides this, certainly the career is essential for a person to afford othe basic needs such as food, shelter, clothing etc.

            Man life can never be narrowed down to just his career. There are some more factors/aspects, whose role is nearly indispensible in every individual’s life. To start with is the role played by the family.To lead a pleasant life, emotional support is inevitable, which can be gained only through his friends and family. The world had come to such a state that everything can be bought through money, except a person who love you by heart

            Yet another aspect is health. ”Health is wealth “is a popular saying which indicates its importance. Only if one stays fit he can perform, he can shine in his career. There is yet another Chinese proverb which quotes that “A person can buy medicines with his money but not his health”.

In a nutshell even though career is considered as a vital part of our life, happy and prosperous life will also count on other things such as family, friends, health and so on...

          

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