Topic: Some people think that universities should give various priorities to those students who come from rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

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Some university students from rural areas find it hard to keep pace with their urban peers. Thus, some educational experts maintain that universities should provide rural students with special help. However, I do not think that these priorities could benefit rural students and their urban schoolmates. (In this paragraph I replace the word priorities with special help. Is this ok? I don’t know what the word “priorities” means in the topic. )
 
Special aid for students who come from rural areas has negative effects on them and their urban counterparts. Firstly, rural students may feel disrespected by receiving special help. Although they are probably not as good as urban students in terms of academic and economic backgrounds at the beginning of studying due to the poor standard of living and inferior education resources in rural areas, they can catch up with their urban peers by hard working. (Is this sentence to long?) If rural students can obtain an honor by their efforts rather than special help, they will be respected. Furthermore, special priorities may cause tension and conflicts between students due to the inequality. University authorities should create the environment whereby students are honored based on their academic or social performance rather than their social status.
 
However, some people argue that poor performance of rural students may be caused by lower schooling and parenting so them should receive special aid. Generally speaking, education resources in urban areas are superior to that in rural areas. But overall, this is not an excuse for universities to give them priorities. The government should allocate more money to promoting the development of education in rural areas. Additionally, education authorities can utilize the Internet to deliver proper schooling to rural areas. These measures will more benefits rural students than giving priorities. (Is any logical errors in this paragraph?)
 
To conclude, offering special aid cannot help rural students to catch up with their urban peers. On the contrary, it may cause conflicts between students. The government should take effective measures to improve education resources in rural areas. As a result, rural students can receive a better schooling and will enjoy a better life.