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1:55 pm
March 7, 2012

Hi, everyone and writefix.
Could you help me ? How to organize my structure ?
In yes/no answer essay, e.g. " Is animal testing nessary ? "
A. Can I put my body structure like this : If I say yes,
paragraph 1, I put my reason 1
paragraph 2, I put reason 2
B. Or can I put
Para 1, I put reasons : reason1 and 2
Para 2, I put condition or limitation of my reasons above : But animal testing must be strictly controlled and limited.
C. Or should I make other structure like :
paragraph 1, I put my reason 1
paragraph 2, I put reason 2
paragraph 3, I put condition or limitation of my reasons above
Which one is the most suitable ? Or should I make other structure ? What ?
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