A common error in writing is to use commas to join sentences. For example, all of these are wrong:
- Every morning, I wake up early, do the morning exercise in the garden.
- It is a personal choice, it depends on the individual.
- Everybody likes John, he’s a nice guy.
- We need to find new drugs to fight disease, some diseases are resisting our current drugs.
- I stink, I need to take a shower.
Use a full stop
We need to fix these sentences. The easiest way is to use a full stop (period).
- Every morning, I wake up early. I do my morning exercise in the garden.
- It is a personal choice. It depends on the individual.
- Everybody likes John. He’s a nice guy.
- We need to find new drugs to fight disease. Some diseases are resisting our current drugs.
- I stink. I need to take a shower.
Join with “so, and, because”
Another way to to join the two parts with coordinating words such as “and,” “so,” or “because.” You might need to rewrite the sentence a little.
- Every morning, I wake up early and do my morning exercise in the garden.
- Everybody likes John because he’s a nice guy.
- We need to find new drugs to fight disease because many diseases are becoming resistant to our current drugs.
- I need to take a shower because I stink
Use colons or semicolons
Another way to to join the two parts is to use colons (:) or semicolons (;)
- It is a personal choice: it depends on the individual.
What would you like to do now?
- Have a look at another error: Fragments.
Visit these websites for more on comma splices. Some of them have good exercises.
sophia li says:
yes, they are absolutely typical common mistakes for foreign language learners.